I must make a proposal for mauna kea scholars with a non-google-able question that I can test using the mauna kea observatory. How is this question so far? and how can i make it more hyper specific? Do dark matter halos in the outer regions of low-density galaxy clusters have the shapes that the Λ(Lambda)CDM model predicts? basically testing whether real dark matter halo shapes match what our standard cosmological model predicts?
Your question is scientifically real and absolutely in-scope for Mauna Kea class telescopes in principle (halo shapes are tested observationally), but as written it’s still a bit too broad and under-specified to be “proposal-testable” because:
What you want is to turn this into a single observing program with: a defined sample, a defined observable, a defined statistic, and a falsifiable comparison.
Here are the decisions that will instantly sharpen it:
“Using deep r+i imaging of 8–12 poor clusters at 0.15<z<0.25, measure the stacked weak-lensing quadrupole signal in annuli 0.5R_{200}<R<1.5R_{200} to infer the mean projected halo axis ratio \langle q\rangle. Test whether \langle q\rangle matches ΛCDM N-body predictions for M_{200}\sim10^{14}M_\odot halos within a 95% confidence interval.”
Non-google-able angle: your exact sample, bands, annuli, statistic, and inference pipeline are unique.
“For 10 low-richness clusters (20<\lambda<40) at z<0.1, measure the ellipticity of the satellite galaxy distribution in R_{200}<R<2R_{200} and test whether the inferred projected axis-ratio distribution is consistent with ΛCDM predictions for halo triaxiality and expected satellite–halo misalignment.”
This is easier observationally, but you must be honest that satellites are an imperfect tracer of DM shape.
“Measure the distribution of misalignment angles \Delta\theta between the BCG major axis (from i-band isophotal fits) and the outer satellite distribution major axis (from members in R_{200}<R<2R_{200}) for poor clusters at 0.05<z<0.15. Compare to ΛCDM predicted alignment distributions; test whether the observed \Delta\theta requires more misalignment than simulations predict.”
This becomes a crisp, testable hypothesis about anisotropic assembly and triaxiality.
If you tell me the instrument + time + whether lensing-depth is realistic, I’ll help you convert your idea into a one-sentence proposal question + a measurable success criterion (e.g., “constrain \langle q\rangle to ±0.1 in the outskirts” or “detect a nonzero quadrupole at >3\sigma”).
the question has to allow me telescope time
To “earn” telescope time, the question has to look like something you can only answer by taking new data (or at least that new Mauna Kea data is essential), with a clear observing plan, feasibility, and a specific deliverable. Your current dark-matter-halo-shape question can work, but only if you anchor it to an instrument-capable observable.
Big reality check: directly testing DM halo shapes via weak lensing is usually hard to justify for a small student allocation unless you have access to something like Subaru/HSC (wide field, deep) and enough time/sample size. So you should tailor the question to the telescope you can plausibly get time on.
Core idea: ΛCDM predicts anisotropic infall along filaments; the outer regions should show velocity anisotropy / substructure aligned with the cluster major axis.
Hyper-specific question template
“Do galaxies in the outskirts (1–2R_{200}) of poor clusters show anisotropic infall (velocity gradient or bimodality) aligned with the photometric major axis, as predicted by ΛCDM assembly along filaments?”
What you observe: multi-object spectroscopy of candidate members around a few nearby poor clusters.
Deliverable: member confirmation + velocity field + quantify anisotropy (e.g., Dressler–Shectman substructure statistic, or velocity dispersion as a function of position angle).
Why it earns time: you cannot get those velocities without telescope spectroscopy.
Core idea: In ΛCDM halos are triaxial; satellites in the outskirts should preferentially align with the halo/BCG major axis (but the strength is debated—nice test).
Hyper-specific question template
“In 3–5 nearby low-richness clusters, is the satellite galaxy spatial distribution in R_{200}<R<2R_{200} significantly elongated (projected axis ratio q) and **aligned** with the BCG major axis more than random at >3\sigma?”
What you observe: deep, good-seeing imaging (one band can work; two bands helps member selection).
Deliverable: BCG isophotal PA + satellite angular distribution + an alignment p-value.
Why it earns time: you need deeper/sharper imaging than surveys for faint satellites and clean shape measurements.
Hyper-specific question template
“Using HSC-like imaging, measure the stacked weak-lensing quadrupole of 10 poor clusters at 0.2<z<0.3 in 0.5–1.5R_{200} and infer the mean projected halo axis ratio \langle q\rangle; compare to ΛCDM predictions.”
Earns time only if: you truly have access to a wide-field imager + enough depth.
Tell me which of these you’re applying for:
Here’s a telescope-time-ready version that keeps your spirit but becomes feasible:
“Do low-richness galaxy clusters show ΛCDM-consistent halo triaxiality signatures in their outskirts, quantified by the alignment between the BCG major axis and the satellite galaxy distribution in R_{200}<R<2R_{200}, using new Mauna Kea imaging to i\sim 24 with <0.8'' seeing?”
That has: sample, observable, radius range, depth/seeing requirement, metric.
Once you answer, I’ll give you 2–3 final “non-google-able” question options tailored to that instrument, each with: target criteria, filters/grating, exposure time logic, and the exact statistic you’ll report.
arent these all tested before though?
Yes—the general ideas have absolutely been tested before. Halo triaxiality, satellite alignment, anisotropic infall, weak-lensing ellipticity: all have a literature. That’s normal. What makes a proposal “non‑google‑able” is usually not the phenomenon, but the exact measurement you will do with a specific dataset/instrument, with a specific sample and metric. Committees don’t expect you to discover a brand-new effect; they expect a clean, feasible test that produces publishable-quality (or at least defensible) results.
Also: your original question (“do halo shapes match ΛCDM?”) is so broad that it reads like a review article. The trick is to slice off a narrow, testable corner where (a) existing results are mixed/limited, or (b) your data configuration is genuinely new (depth, wavelength, redshift range, low-richness regime, outskirts only, etc.).
Here are concrete ways to make it “not already done” in the way your proposal needs:
Avoid “this has never been done.” Instead say:
Pick an instrument track:
“In three low-richness clusters at 0.05<z<0.10, is the velocity field of confirmed members in 1–2R_{200} anisotropic with respect to the BCG major axis, quantified by \Delta\sigma_v(\phi) and a Dressler–Shectman substructure test, at >3\sigma?”
Novelty can be: outskirts-only + poor clusters + confirmed membership with your own redshifts.
“Using new r+i imaging reaching i=24, what is P(\Delta\theta) between the BCG major axis and the satellite distribution in R_{200}<R<2R_{200} for 5 poor clusters at z\sim0.08, split by satellite color (red vs blue)?”
Novelty: explicit outskirts, explicit depth/seeing, explicit split by population.
“Measure the stacked weak-lensing quadrupole in 0.7–1.7R_{200} for 8 low-richness clusters at 0.2<z<0.3 and infer \langle q\rangle; test whether \langle q\rangle differs from ΛCDM N-body expectations by >0.1.”
Novelty: low-richness + outer annulus + explicit effect size.
Committees reject projects that (a) need huge samples, (b) rely on hard systematics, or (c) don’t specify the measurement. If we tailor your question to the exact telescope/instrument/time, it becomes both feasible and “yours.”
Tell me which telescope/instrument you’re applying for and how much time you can plausibly request. Then I’ll give you 2–3 final question statements that:
I can use any telescope on mauna kea as of now and right now have no time constraints.
If you truly can request any Mauna Kea telescope with no time constraint, you can afford to ask a more “ΛCDM-level” question—but you still need to make it proposal-realistic: pick one facility + instrument mode and design a program that produces a specific dataset and statistic.
Also, the “non‑google‑able” part is easiest if you commit to a very specific, pre-registered measurement (sample definition + radial range + statistic + comparison simulation). People can google “halo shapes,” but they can’t google your exact “8 clusters, 0.18<z<0.25, HSC grizy, quadrupole shear in 0.8–1.6R_{200}, compare to IllustrisTNG vs dark-matter-only.”
This is the cleanest “real DM shape” test because it measures the mass distribution more directly than satellites/X-ray.
Hyper-specific question (strong proposal form):
Do low-richness clusters (20<\lambda<40) at 0.15<z<0.30 have a mean projected dark-matter halo axis ratio \langle q\rangle in the outskirts (0.8R_{200}<R<1.6R_{200}) consistent with ΛCDM predictions, as inferred from the stacked weak-lensing quadrupole shear measured with Subaru/HSC grizy imaging?
What makes it “hyper specific” (and not google-able):
One-sentence falsifiable claim you can put in the proposal:
“We will test whether \langle q\rangle_{\mathrm{obs}} differs from ΛCDM expectations by \Delta q \gtrsim 0.1 in 0.8–1.6R_{200} for poor clusters.”
Question:
Is the infall region (1–2.5R_{200}) of poor clusters kinematically anisotropic in a way consistent with ΛCDM filamentary accretion, measured via member galaxy redshifts and a position-angle–dependent velocity dispersion \sigma_v(\phi)?
This earns time because it’s impossible without a big spectroscopy dataset; it’s also less “direct DM shape” and more “assembly geometry,” but still fundamentally ΛCDM structure growth.
Question:
In low-richness clusters at z<0.1, does the satellite distribution in R_{200}<R<2R_{200} show a misalignment-angle distribution P(\Delta\theta) with the BCG that matches ΛCDM predictions, split by satellite color (quenched vs star-forming)?
This is observationally simpler than lensing (but less direct).
Replace vague nouns with numbers + methods:
Do you want the project to be primarily:
Pick one, and I’ll give you a final, polished 1–2 sentence question plus a short “Observing Plan” paragraph that sounds like a real Mauna Kea Scholars proposal.
Imaging + weak lensing
Good—Subaru/HSC (or CFHT-class wide-field, but on Mauna Kea it’s HSC) is the right match for imaging + weak lensing, especially if you care about halo shapes in the outskirts. Now you need to make the question hyper-specific in a way that (1) is clearly measurable with your data and (2) can’t be answered by citing a single existing paper because it’s tied to your target definition, radial range, and statistic.
Do low-richness clusters (20<\lambda<40) at 0.20<z<0.35 have a mean projected dark-matter halo axis ratio \langle q\rangle in the outskirts (0.8R_{200}<R<1.8R_{200}) consistent with ΛCDM, as inferred from the stacked weak-lensing quadrupole shear measured with Subaru/HSC grizy imaging?
Why this is hyper-specific: it nails the sample, redshift, radial annulus, instrument, bands, and the statistic (quadrupole shear → q).
Is the radial trend of halo ellipticity q(R) from 0.5R_{200} to 2R_{200} in low-richness clusters at 0.20<z<0.35 consistent with ΛCDM predictions, using HSC stacked shear quadrupole measurements in 3–4 fixed annuli?
This is harder but more distinctive: you’re not just measuring “a shape,” you’re measuring how it changes with radius.
Does the weak-lensing–inferred halo major axis align with the BCG major axis in the outskirts (0.8–1.8R_{200}) at the level predicted by ΛCDM, quantified by the misalignment distribution P(\Delta\theta) for low-richness clusters at 0.2<z<0.35?
This gives you two deliverables: axis ratio and alignment, both from imaging.
To fully lock it down for a proposal, you should commit to:
Cluster selection source + cut
Example: “redMaPPer clusters with 20<\lambda<40, 0.20<z<0.35, excluding obvious mergers (centroid offset > X or richness map asymmetry).”
Background galaxy selection rule (crucial for weak lensing)
Example: “background galaxies with photo-z such that z_s > z_l + 0.1 (or z_s > 1.2z_l), shapes measured in i-band; use grizy for photo-z.”
Exact annulus/outer-region definition
Example: “primary measurement in 0.8–1.8R_{200}” (outer enough to reduce baryonic rounding, inner enough to keep signal).
Exact shape estimator
Say explicitly: “fit an elliptical NFW (or elliptical surface density) model to the stacked tangential + cross shear including the quadrupole term,” and report \langle q\rangle with uncertainty.
Simulation comparison you’ll use
Example: “compare to predicted \langle q\rangle(M,z) from a specific ΛCDM simulation suite (DM-only and hydro) matched to the same mass/richness and redshift distribution.”
That last piece is what turns “ΛCDM predicts…” into something graders can’t dismiss as hand-wavy.
If you want one “final” version, I’d use:
Using Subaru/HSC grizy imaging, do low-richness clusters (20<\lambda<40) at 0.20<z<0.35 have a mean projected halo axis ratio \langle q\rangle in 0.8R_{200}<R<1.8R_{200} consistent with ΛCDM, as measured from the stacked weak-lensing quadrupole shear signal?
If the committee thinks you’re proposing to observe hundreds of clusters from scratch, they’ll reject it. Phrase it as either:
can you explain your second question? And I am currently not sure if i can use an existing cluster catalog
My “second question” was: Do you want to measure just one halo-shape number, or also measure alignment, or even a radial trend? I asked because each option changes what data you need, what analysis you do, and how easy it is to justify telescope time.
So my “second question” is really: what level of ambition do you want, given that weak lensing is signal-starved and more bins/metrics = more time/sample/systematics?
You can still do weak lensing, but you must (a) define targets and (b) know their redshifts/masses well enough to define R_{200} or at least a consistent radial scale.
Here are the realistic paths:
Use a catalog (best if allowed):
Select clusters with known centers + redshifts + richness proxy, then spend telescope time on deep imaging optimized for shapes and background selection.
If catalogs are not allowed, do “self-contained” targeting: pick a small number of known bright clusters with well-established redshifts from the literature (this is still “a catalog,” just not a survey catalog), then your new data is the lensing imaging.
This is usually acceptable unless they explicitly forbid any prior target knowledge, which would be unusual.
If they truly want everything from new observations: you’d need a two-stage program:
That’s a lot, even with “no time constraints,” because it’s conceptually complex.
If you paste the exact assignment sentence about “non-google-able” + telescope time, I’ll translate it into what reviewers are actually looking for and help you choose between (1) \langle q\rangle, (2) \langle q\rangle+alignment, or (3) q(R).
i have about 2 hour telescope time, but as much time as i need to process data
With ~2 hours of telescope time, a full weak-lensing halo-shape test (quadrupole shear → \langle q\rangle) is possible only if you leverage existing deep imaging (e.g., HSC survey data) and use your 2 hours for something targeted (calibration or a small, high-leverage add-on). If your 2 hours must produce the main lensing dataset from scratch, that’s realistically too little time for a convincing halo-ellipticity measurement, because weak lensing needs lots of background galaxies (depth) and excellent PSF control across a wide field.
So the “telescope-time-earnable” way to keep imaging + weak lensing is to frame your proposal as a pilot + feasibility test with a very specific, measurable success criterion.
Here’s a version that fits 2 hours and still tests ΛCDM in a meaningful way:
Pilot test: For one nearby low-richness cluster (0.05<z<0.10), can we detect a non-zero stacked weak-lensing quadrupole signal in the annulus 0.8–1.6R_{200} using Subaru/HSC i-band shapes plus gr colors for background selection, and infer a constraint on projected halo axis ratio q at the \sigma_q \lesssim 0.2 level?
Why this works: you’re not promising a definitive cosmology result; you’re promising a measurable constraint (or an upper limit) on halo ellipticity with a small, tightly defined dataset.
Your analysis time (unlimited) then goes into PSF modeling, shear measurement, background selection, and fitting an elliptical mass model.
Even if they say “no existing catalogs,” you can still target a famous, well-studied nearby cluster (Coma, Virgo, Perseus, etc.). That’s not “google-able” in the sense of the answer—your data and measurement are unique. The “non-google-able” part becomes: “with these exposures and this pipeline, what constraint do we get on q?”
Pick one of these and put it explicitly in the proposal:
When you say “imaging + weak lensing,” do you have access to Subaru/HSC specifically, or is your 2 hours more like a smaller telescope imager (UH 2.2m, etc.)?
Tell me which instrument you’re likely to use (HSC vs something else), and whether your instructor allows using archival multi-band photometry for background selection. Then I’ll give you a final one-sentence question + a concrete 2-hour exposure plan (filters, time split, and what you can claim statistically).
what does the 0.05<z<0.10 mean and what would be good numbers for it, same with 20<λ<40 and (0.8R200<R<1.8R200)
z, \lambda, and R_{200} are just compact ways astronomers specify (1) distance/epoch, (2) cluster “richness” (how many member galaxies), and (3) a physically meaningful cluster size scale. The numbers I suggested were example ranges that tend to make a weak-lensing project more feasible and interpretable—here’s what each means and what “good numbers” look like for a 2‑hour imaging+lensing pilot.
Why this matters for weak lensing in 2 hours
Good pilot range: z \approx 0.15–0.30 is often a sweet spot for lensing if you have multiband imaging for background selection (because lensing efficiency is good and clusters aren’t absurdly huge on the sky).
Good “play it safe with background selection” range: z \approx 0.1–0.25.
So: my earlier 0.05–0.10 is fine for “nearby cluster imaging”, but for weak lensing you might actually prefer 0.15–0.30 depending on instrument depth and whether you have good color/photo-z info.
Why it matters
Good numbers:
If you’re not sure you can use catalogs, you can still use the concept: “select a cluster with mass roughly M_{200}\sim 10^{14}–10^{15}M_\odot”—you just won’t phrase it in \lambda.
Why use radii in units of R_{200}?
Because different clusters have different physical sizes. Using R/R_{200} lets you compare apples-to-apples.
Why that particular range?
Good numbers for a 2-hour pilot:
Also practical note: to measure shear in 1–2R_{200}, your camera needs enough field of view to cover those radii plus background region. This is another reason HSC (wide-field) matters a lot.
If you want a version that’s both defensible and feasible:
That combination gives you a better chance of detecting something with limited exposure time, while still being “outer-halo-ish.”
Which imager are you actually planning to request on Mauna Kea—Subaru/HSC, or something else? Field of view and depth completely change what redshift and radial range are “good.” If it’s HSC, I’ll give you concrete target-selection cuts (redshift, richness) that are realistically workable for a 2-hour pilot.
i do have subaru telescope time. now the question is do i use 0.15<z<0.30 or 0.05<z<0.10
Use 0.15<z<0.30 for an HSC weak-lensing project, especially with only ~2 hours.
Here’s the logic in the exact terms that matter for feasibility and for your proposal write-up:
Why 0.15<z<0.30 is better (for weak lensing with HSC):
When 0.05<z<0.10 would be the better choice:
A clean final phrasing could be:
“We will target N=1–3 clusters at 0.20<z<0.30 to measure the stacked weak-lensing quadrupole shear in 0.5–1.5R_{200} and constrain the mean projected halo axis ratio \langle q\rangle.”
If you tell me whether you’re planning 1 cluster deep or 2–3 clusters shallower, I’ll suggest the tighter redshift cut and a realistic filter/time split (e.g., mostly i for shapes + enough color for background selection).
Do low-richness clusters (20<λ<40) at 0.15<z<0.30 have a mean projected dark-matter halo axis ratio ⟨q⟩ in the outskirts (0.8R200<R<1.8R200) consistent with ΛCDM predictions, as inferred from the stacked weak-lensing quadrupole shear measured with Subaru/HSC grizy imaging? can u tell me (very specifically) what data i would be going to gather? Telescope type: Hyper Suprime-Cam (HSC),
Lens config: i-band (770nm).
Choose 1 cluster with a well known red-shift and center (Brightest Cluster Galaxy), observe in i-band, and possibly add g or r for basic color separation if needed.
70-90 minutes of telescope time depending on the cluster.
As the time constraints are 2 hours on the telescope (as told by Mr. Weir), this project would only be possible with leverage of existing data and using the telescope time for something targeted (calibration or a small, high-leverage add-on)
Pilot+feasibility test
Interpreting Data: Stacked Weak Lensing Analysis
Very specifically, with Subaru + HSC and your stated constraints, the new data you gather is wide-field, dithered imaging (mostly i-band) of one known cluster field (plus calibrations). That imaging becomes (after reduction) a calibrated coadd image + per-exposure images + catalogs that let you measure galaxy shapes and compute a shear field; then you extract the quadrupole (elliptical) component of the shear in your chosen radial annulus. Below is a concrete, proposal-ready “what we will obtain” list.
A dithered HSC i-band imaging sequence of the cluster field
Short g and/or r imaging for crude color separation
These are typically taken as part of the instrument/observatory calibration plan, but in a proposal you should state you will use them:
From your observing run, after reduction you will have:
Even with one cluster, “stacked” can mean either:
Your core observable will be:
A clean way to state it:
If you truly observe only 1 cluster, you shouldn’t call the lensing “stacked across clusters.” Call it:
That keeps the proposal logically tight.
Will you assume existing multi-band photometry/photo-z for background selection, or do you want your 2 hours to include your own g/r imaging?
If you tell me which of those is allowed, I’ll write you a tight “Observations” paragraph with an explicit exposure breakdown (e.g., 12\times 360 s in i + 4\times 180 s in r, dithers, and expected depth/seeing assumptions).
can u give me a simple statement of the raw data
Raw data (simple statement):
A set of dithered HSC i-band CCD exposures (individual FITS images) of one galaxy-cluster field—each exposure contains pixel counts (ADU) vs. x–y position, plus the FITS headers (time, pointing/WCS, airmass, etc.)—along with standard calibration frames/products (biases, flats, and usually PSF/astrometric/photometric calibration references).
If you also take color data: a smaller set of HSC g- and/or r-band FITS exposures of the same field, taken with the same kind of dithering.
what wavelengths am i looking at
With HSC you’re looking at optical wavelengths. Since you said your primary configuration is i-band (770 nm), that’s your main wavelength.
Here are the relevant HSC filters and their approximate central wavelengths (good enough for a proposal-level statement):
So if you observe only i-band, you’re mainly probing light around 0.77 microns. If you add g or r for color separation, you’re adding coverage around 0.48 µm and/or 0.62 µm.
If you want, I can help you write a single sentence like: “We will obtain deep imaging at \lambda \approx 0.77,\mum (HSC-i), with optional \lambda \approx 0.48–0.62,\mum (HSC-g/r) for color-based background selection.”
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